Making Decisions-Draft Two
Growing up means making my own decisions. Because I am old enough, I should be independent. Furthermore, I can’t depend on adults any more. I can face the decisions which I made with responsibility. Therefore, I should begin to learn how to make my own decisions.
The hardest decision that I ever made was to choose which senior high school to study. After the first exam of the Basic Entrance Examination, I was very hesitant whether I should take part in the second Basic Entrance Examination or not. At last, I gave up participating the second exam, and then I chose the National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School. Now I think that I didn’t make a wrong decision.
posted by Dora at 5:17 AM
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Growing up means making my own decisions. When I am old enough, I should be independent. Furthermore, I can’t depend on adults any more. I can face the decisions which I made with responsibility. Therefore, I should begin to learn how to make my own decisions.
The hardest decision that I ever made was to choose which senior high school to study. After the first exam of the Basic Entrance Examination, I was very hesitant whether I should take part in the second Basic Entrance Examination or not. At last, I gave up participating the second exam, and then I chose the National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School. Now I think that I didn’t make a wrong decision.
* 第二段主題句是說難決定是選擇哪所學校就讀，但本文中卻毫無提到經過情形或原因，只提到兩刺基測，然後就選擇南商，難以決定在哪，毫無描述。
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