Making Decisions-Draft One
Growing up means making my own decisions. Because I am old enough, I should independent. Furthermore, I can’t depend on adults any more. I can face the decisions which I made with responsible. Therefore, I should begin to learn how to make my own decisions.
The hardest decision that I ever made was to choose which senior high school to study. After the first exam of the Basic Entrance Examination, I am very hesitant whether I should take part in the second Basic Entrance Examination or not. At last, I gave up to participate the second exam, and then I chose the National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School. Now I think that I didn’t make a wrong decision.
posted by Dora at 8:19 PM
5 Comments:
"I gave up to participate the second exam," should change into "I gave up participating the second exam,".
"I should independent."
should change into "I should be independent."
"I can face the decisions which I made with responsible."
→responsible is adjective.
You should use "responsibility".
"Because I am old enough, I should independent."-->" Because I am old enough, I should be independent."
Learning how to make decisions by yourself is great!
You not only should begin to learn how to make your own dicisions,but also should begin to learn how to make right decisions.
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