Autobiography-1-Draft One
Seventeen years ago, an active and easygoing baby was born in Tainan city. It’s me, Yu-Jheng Shen. I am studying in National Tainan Commercial Vocation School. There are four people in my family. My father is a simple and assiduous person. My mother is very serious, but prudential. My older brother is a very clever person. He can teach me everything which I don’t understand. Now he studies in National Cheng Kung University. I am very lucky to grow in a great family.
I like to play volleyball. I used to be a member in volleyball team. My classmates always made up a group to take part in the inter-class volleyball games, and we won the champions in all the competitions. I think it’s because we are united. On the other hand, I am interested in math, so I usually discuss difficult problems with my classmates. Teaching is learning, so my math is very outstanding.
7 Comments:
Yes, you are good at math!
So, I will often go to ask you some math questions if I can't understand it, and , you can't say no!!
"I am very lucky to grow in a great family."
maybe you can plus "up"
"I am very lucky to grow up in a great family"
*I am very lucky to grow in a great family.* should change to *I am very lucky to grow up in a great family.*
You are really good at math and volley.
Your math and volley is excellent.I admire you.
Great!!
To bless you!
I like your learning attitude.It's good for you. Attitude is everything,right?!
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