Translations-Draft One
TV Programs
Choosing TV programs with cares is a major thing. Although the television is the most important channel of offer information and entertainments, it may have some disadvantages. Some programs, full with violence and lust, have bad influences for teenagers. It’s harm for eyesight to cost too much time in watching TV. Therefore, we should choose the TV programs which are health for us. The most important thing is not be couch potatos.
Computers
Computers
Computers play important roles in our lives because they can not only help students hand in their homework quickly but also help people send information in time. As long as you turn on your computer, you will fall in love with it. Nevertheless, be sure to remind yourself that don’t spend too much time when you sit in front of the computer. Most of the parents don’t like their children depend on the computers, especially the discussions of BBS waste time very much.
6 Comments:
"It's harm for eyesight to cost too much time in watching TV." change into "It's harm for eyesight to spend too much time watching TV." is better.
*It’s harm for eyesight to cost too much time in watching TV.* should chage to *It's harm for eyesight to spend too much time in watching TV.*
And I want to tell you *cost* can use by ouly buy thing. For example *This computer costs me 20 dollars.* It can't use by use time.
You wrote well.
I can't find the mistakes in your article anymore.
"Choosing TV programs with cares is a major thing." change into " Choosing TV programs with caring is a major thing."
" you will fall in love with it." change into " you will fall in love with them."
cost只能用在金錢上。
"which are health for us."
maybe you can change "health" into "healthy"
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