Tips for Staying Healthy - Draft One
There are some tips for staying healthy. First, you should eat more fruit and vegetables, and also have regular three meals every day. Don’t smoke and drink, they will hurt your lungs and liver, and you maybe will get cancers. And also don’t eat too much junk food and fast food which are usually fried in oil or fat. Then you should have enough sleep every day, don’t stay up frequently. If you don’t have enough sleep, you will not have power next day. Having a good mood every day is also very important for staying healthy. In the end, you should have a regular exercise every week. You should exercise three days in a week at least. For a long time, you will have a strong body, and you also will have good health. If you want to stay healthy, you should follow all of the tips.
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"and you maybe will get cancers"
可以改成"and you may get cancers"
*First, you should eat more fruit and vegetables* should change to *First, you should eat more fruits and vegetables*.
" Don’t smoke and drink, they will hurt your lungs and liver"
you can plus "or"
Don’t smoke and drink, or they will hurt your lungs and liver
"Don’t smoke and drink, they will hurt your lungs and liver, and you maybe will get cancers.""they" should change into "you".
It is really not easy to stay healthy.
We have many things to do to make us become more health.
"you maybe will get cancers".
you can change to"you will get cancers" or"you may get cancers.".
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