Learing English-Draft One
I have to do many things when I am learning English. First, I should remember a lot of new words, and then I will practice their correct pronunciation and spelling in several times. At the end, I must realize many grammars, using all the things what I used to learn to write lots great articles. While I am learning English, I also go to a cram school and read many books to expand my knowledge. If I study hard in learning English, all of the knowledge will be my property.
posted by Dora at 7:22 PM
5 Comments:
"I have to do many things when I am learning English." can change into "There are many things I have to do when I learn English." is better.
You did a very good job!
Following these tips your English will be better.
*I used to learn to write lots great articles.*
lots should change to lots of.
Good konwledge can let people be rich.
"If I study hard in learning English" can be changed into "If I study hard to learn English."
"I study hard in learning English"
you can say "I study hard in English".
I hope you can have a lots of knowledge in your brain.
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